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In my opinion, library is the best place to study. First, it is the quiet place. As making rules that not making noisy in library, poeple keep quiet. Second, many books are in the library. This mean we can contact a lot of information.
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I think humorous stories are better choice to read. First, it make me happy. Through laughing and reducing stress, not only me even everybody can feel happy. Second, I can make other people happy. Through telling these stories to other people, they can feel happy and everybody can share happiness together.
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Thomas,
Score: 2 Grammar/word choice corrections follow.
In my opinion, the library is the best place to study. First, it is a quiet place. This is because there are rules that prevent us from making noise in library; thus people keep quiet. Second, there are many books in the library. This means we can gather a lot of information easily when we use the library.
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Score: 2
Thomas,
You're going to need to work a lot at improving your ability to speak if you're planning on doing well on your TOEFL test. Right now, you are not producing nearly enough intelligible language to get any score higher than a 2. If you get all 2s on each of the six questions, your score will be 15/30. I suggest working a lot on memorizing a variety of English phrases and do everything in your power to go overseas and study in America or Canada, even if it's just for a short time.
There arent' a lot of huge grammar problems below but you said the word, "happy" five times. At some point you need to be able to hear that you are overusing this extremely vague and boring word!
I think humorous stories are a better choice to read. First, they make me happy. Through laughing and reducing stress, not only me even everybody can feel happy. Second, I can make other people happy. Through telling these stories to other people, they can feel happy and everybody can share happiness together.
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